Heading West with Wallace Stegner

The history nerd in me got me interested in John Wesley Powell, the one-armed guy who first traveled through the Colorado River’s wilder reaches. When I saw the book offered by my library was written by Wallace Stegner, I couldn’t resist. Beyond the Hundredth Meridian: John Wesley Powell and the Second Opening of the West was published in 1953 but it reads much more freshly than you would expect from a 65-year-old book.

For anyone who has interest in either the U.S. West or in the wise use of environmental resources (specifically) or in the best uses and limits of government or in the complexity of human existence, this book is highly recommended.

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Obviously home schoolers are deprived of a meaningful education. This kid only knew something about art (rather than Marvel movies), could express it in a physical manner (rather than buying it), and could write capably about the experience (rather than leaning on a meme).

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Philip Snider and a Few of His Offspring

Friday in the mail I received the current issue of the Missouri State Genealogical Association Journal complete with the first half of my article, “Father of Fair Grove: The Descendants of Philip Snider.” While none of you is likely to care, Philip Snider was the first of one branch of my mother’s family to come to Missouri, migrating from North Carolina to the area of Greene County northeast of Springfield in 1843.

What’s remarkable about Snider? He moved about a thousand miles in his forties, when moving meant, at best, hopping a steamboat. Along with another family, Philip and his children came to this part of Greene County when virtually no one else lived there. The Native Americans–Osage mostly–had already been “encouraged” to move southwest to Oklahoma.

Only a handful of people care about this man and his descendants, but actually that number isn’t as small as one might think. The three generations following Philip took his offspring up over 120. My mother, ninety-eight years old, is in the fourth generation. Yesterday, at my house, I saw three members of the seventh generation. Although I’m not going to do the census, I’d surmise that there are presently at least a thousand people who trace their origins back to this guy. Of course, not all of them are aware or interested, but that’s okay.

My audience for this article is relatively small, but those who find it interesting will probably find it very interesting, very valuable. What more can a writer strive for?

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Visualizing Capital Punishment

The chart to the right shows (as it says) “Execution rates in G20 members in 2016.”  Statistics and their visual representations can be tricky things. Take a look at the chart and ask yourself what it says. I could draw a couple of different conclusions from it.

  • Wow, Saudi Arabia and China execute people at an incredibly high rate. The United States’ rate is pretty close to zero by comparison, or . . .
  • Wow, the United States is one of only five nations among the G20 who still use capital punishment. The only people who use it more are Saudi Arabia and China, neither of which is often seen as human rights champions, or . . .
  • Wow, Russia claims not to use capital punishment, but they’re apparently murdering political enemies by poisoning them in England. Okay, that’s not exactly in the chart, but it did cross my mind.

In the end, I have to ask myself what Amnesty International was trying to say with this chart. Statistics and their graphical representations do not speak for themselves. The way in which they are presented and selected is a key tool for any writer.

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Disagreement Doesn’t Require Rejection

I have been married longer than you have (probably) been alive. My wife is perfect.

And that was a lie. There are things about her that are not perfect. There are factors in her personality and tendencies that I would change if I could. I used to think that I would want to transform her appearance as well, but I’ve grown up from that foolishness.

What’s my point here? For me to have an issue with my wife, I don’t have to utterly reject her. Happily, she feels the same way about me, as I have many flaws.

When I ask you to find a point of critique in a reading, you do not have to disagree with the reading. Instead, you have to disagree or take issue with or feel uneasy about some small aspect of the reading.

Let’s take, as an example, people who think that right to bear arms (gun rights) are a bunch of foolishness. These people are taking issue with the United States Constitution and its Second Amendment. Do these people say, “I think guns shouldn’t be in private hand; therefore, I utterly reject the Constitution”? No! They say something like this:

  • I think the Second Amendment was a mistake and should be repealed.
  • I think the Second Amendment has been misinterpreted and should be correctly interpreted.
  • I think the Second Amendment is poorly worded and should be clarified.

None of those statements requires us to think that Congress and the Supreme Court and Freedom of Speech and all that should be junked.

When I ask you to find a point of critique, you’re just looking for that little blemish, that little flaw. Or you could be saying, “This whole thing is a useless pile of junk,” but you can probably handle that easily enough.

 

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Sources on Capital Punishment

In reading over some papers inspired by Bryan Stevenson’s Just Mercy, I have learned a fair bit about sources that rise to the top of a Google search. Let me share a few observations.

It seems as if everybody who searches on this topic winds up at deathpenaltyinfo.org. While this site is highly factual, it is also highly opinionated. Let me give you an example. A student was trying to answer the question, “Why do prisoners spend so long on death row (before executions)?” The nice people at the site above provided a helpful page, “Time on Death Row,” which said a great deal about how long people stay there and how awful it is. What it completely failed to do is tell why. This website exists to push the argument against capital punishment; therefore, we should not be surprised that they don’t say, “The main reason for long stays on death row is endless appeals and a slow-moving court system.”

Another site that has popped up on several Works Cited is the American Civil Liberties Union. Their page “The Case Against the Death Penalty” provides useful information, but notice what happens when you go there. Instead of going straight to the material, we get a pitch for money. What interests them most: the topic or the money? That’s probably not fair, but we should never ignore the ulterior motives behind a source. That said, the ACLU page linked above lays out some great anti-death-penalty arguments. Use it, but recognize where they’re coming from.

By the way, I looked for a pro-death-penalty counterpart to the ACLU or deathpenaltyinfo.org. And to the best of my efforts, they just aren’t out there lurking on the web. That’s kind of an interesting fact. If the topic were abortion, we could easily find the flagship organizations on either side.

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Glass Half Full or Empty?

Here’s an intriguing case of how two journalists looked at the same data and led a story with completely different points of view.

The basic story is that the company Bankrate did a survey of 1,000 people, asking whether they had more credit-card debt or emergency savings. Wouldn’t that seem hard to spin? Let’s see what the writers did.

Robin Saks Frankel, at Bankrate, gives us this headline:

58% of Americans have more emergency savings than credit card debt

On the other hand, at MarketWatch, we see this across the top of the page:

1 in 5 Americans have more credit-card debt than savings

Lest you think that the difference lies simply in the headline, the opening paragraphs of these stories bring the headlines’ announcements to the fore.

So which story is right? In fact, both of them are. What happened is that Bankrate saw the glass half full, while MarketWatch dwelled on the glass half empty. Frankel, in my opinion, deserves higher marks since the 58% number is a high-water level while the “1 in 5” figure is rather old news.

That MarketWatch writer provided no context for the “1 in 5” reference, so we have no way to know if that is more than last year or less or about the same. The Bankrate story lets us have that context, explaining that the 21% of Americans with more credit-card debt than savings is the lowest in the last eight years. I guess if the MarketWatch writer–whose name is mercifully not attached to the story–had included that tidbit, it would have sort of undercut the headline.

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The Need to Read Carefully

This just in: Things are looking up financially at the New York Times. In coverage of the media corporation’s quarterly earnings report, Reuters had this to say:

The New York Times Co (NYT.N) pleased investors with market-beating profit and revenue as digital subscriptions surged, underscoring the turnaround in its fortunes that had wavered as fewer people bought newspapers.

Keep in mind that phrase “market-beating profit,” because later in the piece–almost at the end–it says,

The company posted a net loss of $57.8 million, compared with a year-ago profit of $37.6 million, mostly due to higher costs and pension settlements.

So where, exactly, was that “market-beating profit”? It turns out that if you exclude those “higher costs and pension settlements,” then the Times did pretty well. Of course those higher costs are a price of them doing business and pension settlements, while perhaps not a recurring expense, did actually count for something. It would be sort of like me bragging about how great my budget look, excluding my increased mortgage and the cost of my European vacation.

And the “market-beating” aspect of the company’s numbers simply referred to them coming in better than the experts had predicted. Things might be looking up for the Grey Lady, but they’re not nearly so rosy as this article would suggest.

Why would this Reuters article be so misleading? While it’s possible that the reporter just wasn’t up to the task, I rather doubt that. Instead, my theory is that this journalist, loyal to the professional, really wants the New York Times to be doing well. When you really want something to be true, you’re more apt to find evidence of it.

Not all “fake news” is malicious, but it can all lead us to incorrect conclusions. We have to read carefully, lest we be fooled by a headline.

 

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What’s My Destiny? Hopefully Not This!

Most of my students are in the early innings of their baseball game of life. Don’t let this be you!

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Hacked off by Lifehack

One of the things that interests me, aside from sourdough biscuits, is the myth of multi-tasking. Since so many of my students think that they can write good material while playing World of Warcraft or binge-watching whatever the cool kids are binge-watching these days, I like to help them understand that they can actually do better work and spend less time doing it if they focus exclusively on that work.

That’s what drew my attention to an article at Lifehack: “The Price of Distraction is Hugely Beyond Your Imagination.” Authored by Leon Ho, the founder of the site and veteran of more than a decade of such profound offerings, this piece came to me with high promise.

It took until paragraph two before the article began waving red flags at me. Try this on:

According to McKinsey, high-skilled workers spend a staggering 28% of their working hours reading and replying to e-mail messages.1 If we learned to manage our communication technology in a more efficient manner, we could give the economy a $900 million to $1.3 trillion boost per year. [emphasis added]

That’s a pretty wide disparity, a factor of over 144,000. Think of it this way: what if the salary promised for your new job would lie between $9 and $1,300,000 dollars an hour. The higher number would represent something like 7% of U.S. gross domestic product. The low end, on the national economy scale, represents the money in Jeff Bezos’ seat cushions. Something tells me that the careful Mr. Ho has gotten his numbers wrong. Most likely it is supposed to be $900 million to $1.3 billion, but I have to wonder: if the author was this careless here, what else did he get wrong?

But in reality, he didn’t get it wrong. Ho’s source has those same figures. So we can’t blame him, right? Read what the source at the McKinsey Group had to say:

MGI’s report, The social economy: Unlocking value and productivity through social technologies, explores their potential economic impact by examining their current usage and evolving application in four commercial sectors: consumer packaged goods, retail financial services, advanced manufacturing, and professional services. These technologies, which create value by improving productivity across the value chain, could potentially contribute $900 billion to $1.3 trillion in annual value across the four sectors.

So what does this report actually say? Does it say that social media usage costs these huge amounts? Not in the least. Instead, it suggests that, if used efficiently, social media could add that much money to the economy. Methinks the Lifehack author didn’t read his source with a great deal of care.

The other sources for the Lifehack article are a mixed bag, including a Mashable article that mashes up more Mashable pieces along with a couple of more reliable sources. Why do I bash Mashable? Try this on from Ho’s source:

Are you one of the lucky employees whose job revolves around social media? Then stay logged in to Twitter, Facebook and Pinterest. If not, your social media recreation could be costing the U.S. economy $650 billion per year — or $4,452 per company.

Let’s do the math on that. That $650 billion hit to the economy costs $4,452 per company. That would suggest that there are north of 140 million companies in the United States. That’s a lot of companies, nearly one for every two citizens! A more careful source suggests that there are about 6 million companies. Again, if a source gets that sort of thing wrong, how can we trust it?

I have a couple of points here for writers of any sort:

  • Use high-quality sources but also read them in a high-quality way. By the time the likes of Mashable get finished mashing, it’s likely they’ll have hopelessly mangled the truth.
  • Read your own material carefully to be sure that you don’t blunder into ethos-destroying statements like the ones reviewed here.

Other than that, I love the original piece!

 

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